The oni of Old Hell didn't get along with the sinners, such that there are souls who don't want to leave the hell now.
^Sorry, I'm not really sure what this line means. The souls now don't want to leave because the new Hell is so much better? It's very confusing and I believe a re-wording would be highly beneficial. I would do it, but I'm not what the English sentence is supposed to mean.
Also doesn't 癒着が酷 imply something deeper than "didn't get along" ?
Also the new link to the Perfect Memento entry on Yama's is unclear, as that page itself is mostly blank, I think the general entry on Yamas provides better information for English speakers who might not know what Yamas are or what they do, unless and until the Perfect Memento page gets an update.
If these issues aren't addressed in a day or two, I'll presume to edit accordingly. TheTrueBlue 12:40, 22 August 2009 (UTC)