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I agree with Cirno not being the top idiot of Gensokyo, but i'm referring to Rumia who for some reason appears to be stupider than her. Mystia on the other hand I disagree with the idea of being dumb by virtue of being illiterate. She is a crafty entrepreneur who capitalizes on her abilities and human superstition to make a successful business.

Sorry, but my English is poor. So pls telle me where my 2 interpretations are weird. On [my last edit], The first is:

While she is described as a weak boss in the Touhou series, if we consider the power of average fairies - who appear often as as regular enemies - we can certainly say she is exceptionally strong for her kind.

I've seen as as is odd, because the relative "who" is nominative & then "average fairies appear often as as regular enemies" seems gramatically bad to me. If this phrase is OK, I suppose single "as" is easier to make this sentence plain. "who appear often as regular enemies". Where is bad on my English? And the second is:

In Perfect Cherry Blossom, she returned to take revenge for her previous fight, but was only a mid-boss and easily defeated like one...

I've not caught what one indicates, so I thought this means that Player defeats Cirno as in the 1st stage of EoSD. But it seems bad. So, if there is any kind person, pls tell me. This request isn't only from my doubt that my edit isn't weird, but also from my hope that I want to make my English & this wiki better! --Masuo64 21:53, 22 November 2008 (UTC)

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